Hmmm. . .

I already showed this to K, but I was wondering what everybody else thought. And I don't think K has seen this draft.

Captions: Three Photographs

When sitting side by side
you give something up.

In one minute
the conversation will begin.

The sky is blue. The sea
is blue. There is no blue
in this picture.

The man holds her
between his fingers—
The woman, in turn,
turns, rotating herself
away from him.

Is there a God in this picture?

A conversation stops
every seven minutes.

When standing face to face,
you give something up.